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Saturday, January 07, 2006

SHE WROTE: How We Write 2

Well, this has been a helluva week. But the good news for me (and Bob) is that Agnes is finally moving in my head, and it's because I started the collage. That part makes Bob twitch, but basically, anything that gets me to put words on the screen is good by him.

The things that make the partnership so electric are the same things that make the partnership so fraught with conflict: We are complete opposites, right down to Bob being left-handed and me being right-handed. And Bob being left-brained and me being right-brained. Bob plans the plot out and then writes it. I dream the characters and then write them. The two processes are not what you'd call a close fit. Once Bob's plan is in place--and he gives me a lot of input into it so it's not like he's controlling--he sits down and writes his scenes. Except he can only write until he gets to my scene. Then he has to wait for me. And I can't write until I've got the dream down, until the characters are running around in my head, and they just weren't there.

So today I turned off the computer and worked on the collage. I gathered up the big box of stuff I'd been collecting for Agnes and started to put it together, at least the basics. Some stuff I glued on for keeps and a lot of it is just straight-pinned on for the moment . . . Well, here; look at it:



So the glasses are both Agnes's eyes and Agnes's symbol; they're the logo at the top of her food column, Cranky Agnes. And the letters of the title are supposed to look a little like dark curly hair. And the two pot racks are her earrings. And the hearts are pinned in there because of Shane, she's going to be looking at him with her heart in her eyes although he's not on the collage yet (Bob says he's like George Clooney in The Peacemaker, so I have to go find images of that). The "Let's Eat" is an old diner sign, and one of the secondary characters owns a diner, plus Agnes cooks and feeds people all the way through the book. The fancy wood at the bottom is Agnes's porch rail and the wicker chairs pinned into the magic marker grass are for the wedding reception she's working toward for the whole week of the book.

But here's what surprised me: There are two big photos and a 3D figure of Maria on there, with another 3D one to go up on top. Who's Maria? She's the bride in the wedding that Agnes has to put on in a week. I thought she was just The Bride, but it turns out she's key to Agnes's motivations and fears and all kinds of good, deep, rich character stuff. So now, having spent most of the day cutting things out and moving things around and coloring things with markers, I think I've got what I need to write.

And somewhere in South Carolina, Bob is banging his head on his desk. Yeah, we have a few kinks in the process to work out. But we will. Nothing but good times ahead.

8 Comments:

At 7/1/06 9:35 PM, Toni said...

At least you know where he lives now...

 
At 8/1/06 2:35 AM, Gracie Lou said...

... that betty boop ceramic jar, possibly of the cookie variety ... is that the betty boop jar that was the inspiration for Shanna's oreo filled jar?

sorry for the non sequitur.

 
At 8/1/06 5:44 AM, Laura V said...

Thanks so much for explaining the collage. They always look wonderful, but it's really interesting to find out what they mean to you. Agnes's 'Let's Eat' mouth looks cranky, but her eyes look sort of scared and/or wistful as she looks at all the wedding preparations. And now I'm wanting to read this book too, and we don't even get Don't Look Down till April.

 
At 8/1/06 7:22 AM, Rosie said...

Ditto on what Laura V. said. The collages are as interesting and intriguing to me as the books. This whole process and the symbolism fascinates me!

 
At 8/1/06 9:59 AM, Etain MacDougall said...

Okay, now I'm into Agnes. Love her porch, love the wicker, and anyone who plans weddings is ok with me. LOVE the fact that Maria stirs up all kinds of feelings in Agnes--fear, reget, longing,hope...Brides do that to all of us, even men, though they might not admit it. Now, what about Shane? George Clooney is hot with his dark eyes and hair. But what sets hime apart from all the other goombah hitmen out there?? I guess that's a question for Sargeant Bob. Bob? Are you there?

 
At 8/1/06 1:04 PM, Gennita Low said...

Anything to get the Writing Done is good. Since I write about spies and can't really go out and target shoot every time I'm stuck, I do a lot of sit-ups. I hate doing sit ups, really, really hate it. I figure it would motivate me to write since I hate it so much. Or at least, I'd have abs of steel when I have to explain to my editor during my New York visit at the end of January why the manuscript is only half done. Maybe I'll start collaging. It looks much more fun.

 
At 9/1/06 2:41 PM, alisande21 said...

The collage is so cool. I've never seen that idea before. It's great to see how an authors mind works.

As for Shane, I've never seen The Peacemaker but I always thought that John Cusak's hitman character in Grosse Pointe Blanke was cute as heck and quite lovable. Not "goomba" at all.

 
At 13/1/06 4:05 PM, Pat said...

Do you have a spot on a blog where you always have your collages on display? (They are more like Cornell boxes. I think of collages as being flat, 2-dimensional--can be mailed in an envelope.)

The collages fascinate me. Very clever--also requiring time commitment and imaginative energy. Eventually taking central stage in a Jennifer Cruisie book on process?

 

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